Kamis, 02 Desember 2010

My Social Teacher

I have a social teacher .Her full name is Reny Indrias Kuntari ,but we usually call her Mrs Reny .She lives in Plandi Jombang.
Mrs Reni is elegant .She is also beautiful .She has long ,straight and black hair .She also have sharp nose .She has white skin .Her eyes are wide and black but sometimes i think brown .She usually wears glasses .
Mrs Reni is an elegant teacher .She is very friendly with her students .She always helps her students who have some problem .That is why a lot of students like her very munch ,And she always be a favorite teacher in my school .
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  1. Evita Anggraeni12 Desember 2010 pukul 17.33

    Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.

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  2. Evita Anggraeni12 Desember 2010 pukul 17.37

    It's a good text, but you should edit some parts of it:
    1. social teacher: social science teacher
    2. have (line 4): has
    3. Mrs Reny is an elegant teacher (line 6): you may delete it because you have written it in line 3
    4. Put (.) or (,) directly at the end of the sentence without space.(Letakkan tanda titik dan koma langsung di akhir kalimat tanpa spasi)
    5. And: and

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  3. Ayu Fatmawati8 Januari 2011 pukul 05.27

    good!!!

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  4. Rifals96 Tingkir8 Januari 2011 pukul 22.46

    good!

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  5. Inesita Rahmawati15 Januari 2011 pukul 05.46

    well done

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